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Telling me what


Telling me what to do

What’s right or wrong

Telling me to leave

What’s good or bad

Telling me to go outside

What's in or out

Telling me to listen

What's now or never

Telling me to sleep

What’s then or when

Telling me to eat

What’s black or white

Telling me what to become

What’s girls or boys

Telling me to do my work

What’s male or female

Telling me to go to school

What’s new or old

Telling me, controlling me

What’s parents or kids

Sheesh!
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Poem I did...a long time ago when I was annoyed that my dad was making me get off the computer.

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Omg oAo I can really feel the emotion in this, which is something I think only the really good poems can do. ;A; Then again, I'm no author myself. BUT, I love this so much! I can seriously feel the irritation to your words, and it's so simple yet effective. Nothing is overstated and your language is succient and lovely too~ :heart: Perfect! :'D

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Thank you so much! :hug::hug::hug:! I'm glad you like my little drabble poem :)

I was like, 10-11-12 when I wrote this XD Angry pree-teen poem attack!

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